REVIEW: The Evaporation of Sofi Snow

Book Review: The Evaporation of Sofi Snow
book cover Book title The Evaporation of Sofi Snow
Series/standalone The Evaporation of Sofi Snow #1
Author Mary Weber
Pages 352
Year published 2017
Category | Genre Young Adult | Fantasy | Dystopia | Alien| Sci-Fi
Rating 2.5 stars

Official Summary

Ever since the Delonese ice-planet arrived eleven years ago, Sofi’s dreams have been vivid. Alien. In a system where Earth’s corporations rule in place of governments and the humanoid race orbiting the moon are allies, her only constant has been her younger brother, Shilo. As an online gamer, Sofi battles behind the scenes of Earth’s Fantasy Fighting arena where Shilo is forced to compete in a mix of real and virtual blood sport. But when a bomb takes out a quarter of the arena, Sofi’s the only one who believes Shilo survived. She has dreams of him. And she’s convinced he’s been taken to the ice-planet.

Except no one but ambassadors are allowed there.

For Miguel, Earth’s charming young playboy, the games are of a different sort. As Ambassador to the Delonese, his career has been built on trading secrets and seduction. Until the Fantasy Fight’s bomb goes off. Now the tables have turned and he’s a target for blackmail. The game is simple: Help the blackmailers, or lose more than anyone can fathom, or Earth can afford.

Review

I received an electronic galley from the publisher in exchange of an honest review.

In A Nutshell

A political alien dystopian story exploring human relationship and social issues.

Highlights

  • The first part of the book was about the game (aka the part that caught my attention). The protagonist of this series, Sofi Snow, was a gamer/hacker, and her brother, Shilo, acted as her avatar in the arena. You might think that you have read way too many dystopian-influenced competition (The Hunger Games being the most famous example), but Weber – for once – took us to the backstage and not to the bright light of the arena and it was a welcomed change. Sofi’s job, alongside her team, the triplets called the three Ns, and Heller, was to send codes to program her brother’s armor, weapons, and tools. It was a fun take as we were shown the team’s banter and strategy.
  • Diverse cast of characters. The protagonist, Sofi, is Native American, the the other lead, Miguel, is Hispanic. Now, the only time Weber touched on Sofi’s cultural background was when describing her owl necklace and her appearance. As this book is not an ownvoice, I respect Weber’s decision to not getting too deep into the Native American belief and culture. As for Miguel, he did talk in Spanish quite frequently, but his background was not described in details.
  • Political and social issues. There were some social issues explored in ‘Sofi Snow’, the most prominent one were human trafficking and technology advancement at the expense of human right. I won’t get into details here as I’m trying to avoid giving out major spoilers. Politics also played a big part in this book since Miguel, the lead, worked as an ambassador.

Things I Wish Were Different

  • Is there such thing as too many plots? Because this book sure has a lot of it. One minute, it was about curing diseases, the next it tried to be all political, and then it went all alien sci-fi on me. Considering how short it was, there were just not enough space to explore each in sufficient depth. The results is a jumbled mess of plots, none of which got adequately explored.
  • The character arc. It shouldn’t be difficult to sell me on Sofi. Seriously. A gamer? Check. Hacker? Check. Sassy? Check. She loved her brother and knew what she want. All of these should make me like her a lot. The problem is I don’t find anything in her personality to make me want to root for her. She is okay, but she didn’t make me fully invested in her cause. On top of that, I don’t see a lot of character growth throughout the book. There were some revelations, yes, but not a lot of growth.
  • Speaking of Sofi, is there anything she cannot do? I understand the need to give your lead at least a sprinkle of special snowflake syndrome. However, in the evaporation of Sofi Snow, everything came to easy for Sofi and Miguel. *MINOR SPOILER WARNING* “Oh, you need a top-secret chip that is nearly impossible to get? Here you go!” “Need a living and talking alien to help you crack a code? What a coincidence, we have one just in tow.” *END OF SPOILER* Furthermore, I like to see my protagonists fight their way instead of being handed solutions in silver platter.
  • The ending. There’s cliff-hanger, then there’s the ending of ‘Sofi Snow’. That may be too harsh, but when I read a book I expected some sort of resolutions of at least a couple of major plots. After that, feel free to drop a plot twist on me and throw me a cliffhanger. I don’t mind (okay, maybe a bit). Everything about the ‘ending’ of Sofi Snow screams sequel and it definitely cannot be read as a stand-alone. I was reading this book on my Kindle when the pages just suddenly ended. I even had to double check whether my e-ARC has missing pages or did they just send me 90% of the book.

Final Score

2.5star
2.5 stars (out of 5 stars)

Verdict

I have mixed feelings about this book. At one end, it certainly has the potential with its concept, political and social themes, and cast of characters. On the other end, it tried to be so many things that it ultimately failed to deliver a single coherent story. There is also the factor that it’s set as a duology and cannot be read as a stand-alone, which means if you read the evaporation of Sofi Snow, you’d need to be ready to invest your resources on two books, instead of just one.

REVIEW: The Love Interest

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Book Review: The Love Interest
book cover Book title The Love Interest
Series/standalone standalone
Author Cale Dietrich
Pages 384
Year published 2017
Category | Genre Young Adult | Sci-fi | Contemporary
Rating 2.5star

Official Summary

There is a secret organization that cultivates teenage spies. The agents are called Love Interests because getting close to people destined for great power means getting valuable secrets.

Caden is a Nice: the boy next door, sculpted to physical perfection. Dylan is a Bad: the brooding, dark-souled guy who is dangerously handsome. The girl they are competing for is important to the organization, and each boy will pursue her. Will she choose the Nice or the Bad?

Both Caden and Dylan are living in the outside world for the first time. They are well-trained and at the top of their games. They have to be—whoever the girl doesn’t choose will die.

What the boys don’t expect are feelings that are outside of their training. Feelings that could kill them both.

Review

In A Nutshell

A book aiming to subvert tropes in YA fiction, but eventually suffers from lack of worldbuilding and poor execution.

Highlights

  • Let’s start with the positives. This book aimed to subvert YA tropes, specifically the love triangle trope. In that regards, I’d say that Dietrich largely succeeded. Even though I never felt the potential of a love triangle brewing at any point in the book, it’s refreshing to see a protagonist who didn’t ultimately fall in love with their chosen one.
  • The blurb. The premise. The concept. The marketing of the book. The Love Interest has this great concept, that behind every great person, there is a spy reporting their every move to a secret organization. I really liked the concept and it’s actually could be made believable. It was, I believe, what made most people read The Love Interest. Well, that and the promise of gay romance.

Things I Wish Were Different

  • Plot holes and poor worldbuilding. The Love Interest was supposed to be a blend between contemporary and SFF. Unfortunately, as science fiction, it failed to deliver due to inconsistency, unexplained plot holes, and convenient timings of things to cover those holes. I could go on and on listing things, but I’d just give some examples to avoid giving out major spoilers.
    One, there was a teenager building dangerous weapons (I’m talking about Avengers-grade weapons, here) in her shed at home, and no one – authority or bad guys – was getting concerned?! At no point in the book, Juliet’s inventions were shown to be kept top secret – she talked freely to Caden about them – yet no one attempted to recruit or kidnap or end her? I found that hard to believe.
    Two. Kaylee was supposedly monitoring Caden’s every move. However, she was conveniently ‘not listening’ at crucial moments. Also, the implant, there were problems with that too.
    Those were just a few things I noticed. Overall, the tech was also not explained very well in term of how they work, which is a let down for me.
  • Awkward dialogues and lack of chemistry. When it comes to romance in SFF books, I have mixed feelings. I am okay with them most of the time, as long as they’re not taking over the story and turned the protagonist into a blabbering mess around their love interest. The dialogue in The Love Interest, though, brings awkward to another level. And it’s not just the interaction between Caden-Dylan or Caden-Juliet either, it’s the whole thing, the whole book. This book is Dietrich’s debut and it certainly feels like one. I do think his writing has potential so here’s hoping for better written dialogue in the future.
    Speaking of chemistry, there was just nothing between Caden-Juliet or Dylan-Juliet that showed us that they have something special so it’s truly surprising to me that Juliet bought it. But then again, this book is a satire, so maybe that is intentional?

Final Score

2.5star
2.5 stars (out of 5 stars)

Verdict

The Love Interest was an attempt to subvert tropes, and as such Dietrich’s effort is appreciated. Ultimately, however, it was a disappointment due to plot inconsistency, plot holes, thin worldbuilding, and awkward dialogues.

Review: Dangerous Girls

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Book Review: Dangerous Girls by Abigail Haas
cover Book title Dangerous Girls
Series no
Author Abigail Haas
Pages 388
Year published 2013
Rating 4 star

Official Summary

It’s Spring Break of senior year. Anna, her boyfriend Tate, her best friend Elise, and a few other close friends are off to a debaucherous trip to Aruba that promises to be the time of their lives. But when Elise is found brutally murdered, Anna finds herself trapped in a country not her own, fighting against vile and contemptuous accusations.

As Anna sets out to find her friend’s killer; she discovers hard truths about her friendships, the slippery nature of truth, and the ache of young love.

As she awaits the judge’s decree, it becomes clear that everyone around her thinks she is not just guilty, but dangerous. When the truth comes out, it is more shocking than one could ever imagine…

Review

Lately, I was in the mood for some good thrillers. Fortunately, I stumbled upon this review by Symone @ Symone Books where she recommended Dangerous Girls. It wasn’t the first time I heard about the book, but apparently I am the type of person who easily swayed by good recommendation because I bought it on impulse after reading Symone’s review (either that or it’s because she wrote very persuasive review, or maybe a bit of both).

Having read several great thrillers throughout 2015 (thank you Gillian Flynn), I was sort of prepared to be let down. I was not. Dangerous Girls is gritty, full of suspense, and it doesn’t sugarcoat the story to make it “more appropriate for teenagers.” Before I dived in, I need to mention that this book includes drinking, drugs, sex, and profanities. Oh and murder.

Plot

Dangerous Girls started out simple enough. A group of friends went to Aruba for spring break. There, they spent their time partying, drinking, and having the best time of their life. Until one of them found murdered in her room. Our MC, Anna, found herself as a suspect and she was arrested and had to spend months in prison while awaiting for the verdict.

Now, for those of you who live in a country where criminal cases go to jury trials, you might be not familiar with the judge trial system. I am by no means a law expert, but this book shows us how is it like to be trapped in a foreign country where the legal system is totally different than what you used to. Strange as it was, the difference in legal system, more than language or cultural difference, seemed to be the one that gave the “trapped in foreign country” vibe. Anna felt like she was being treated as a scapegoat because she was a foreigner. Her frustration was most evident during the trials when she realized that a single judge will decide her fate.

The narrative went back and forth between the current murder investigation and the past when Anna met Elise, became her best friend, and the days leading to Elise death. I could see why Haas decided to weave it that way, because in this book, the past is about as important, if not more, than the current events. At its essence, this book is more about psychology and human relationships than it is about murder investigation. We were left blind, in prison, with Anna while the world kept going and her friends went back to live their life.

There are some strange things that felt a bit like happenstance and other elements that felt forcefully added to advance the plot. However, those are minor stuff that I was able to shrug off because I was too busy tapping my phone to read the next page.

Characters

Anna is not a likeable narrator. There, I said it. She did, however, tell a very compelling story. It’s like when you were at the party and one of your classmate that you don’t like was sitting there telling a story. And you came anyway because she always tells such a good story. It is weird because I do sympathize with her situation, but not with her.

The book is not without its limitations, mainly in terms of secondary characters. It is partly because we only got one POV and Anna isn’t really the type of person who looked beneath people’s exterior. Apart from Anna and Elise, we don’t really get to know anyone, even her friends. We are told that Mel is whiny and Chelsea is uptight, but they aren’t actually given any real personality. And what about AK or Max? I barely know anything about them. We were only shown the important bits that related to the case, not the parts that make these characters real. This is perhaps a compromise the author has chosen to take because she wanted to dig deeper into Anna’s mind, but at the end of the day, I knew who the murderer is long before the book ends because of this sort of cherry-picking. I’m definitely not saying that you should fill your book with red herring though.

Verdict

I have been guilty of rating a book, especially a murder mystery, based on whether or not I could guess the murderer. If it’s too easy, I will dock half a star, if you manage to fool me, I give you an extra half-star. It’s sort of stupid, but I do feel my enjoyment of a crime mystery decreases if it’s not a mystery at all. However, I will refrain from doing that here, mainly because Dangerous Girls felt more like psychological thriller than murder mystery, and partly because I try to be objective (the keyword here is try).

Am I allowed to say that I enjoy a book about murder and debauchery? Because yes, I really enjoyed Dangerous Girls. So what if it’s not the most mind-blowing thing ever? It’s a ride you’d want to hop on all the same.

Final score

4 stars
  4 stars (out of 5 stars)


Let me know if you have read Dangerous Girls or if it’s on your TBR. If you have read it, do you like the book?


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